Nimble's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[One hundred and seventy]

Woah.

That was pretty nice. i'd say the feel of the song is cynical,the humorous type of sad. but anyways,for me it was a bit too repetitive and you couldve shortened the song and the content would have stayed the same.nevertheless,it was a pretty good composition. this is definitely a favorite and a download(when i decide on a download day lol)

CielOuvert responds:

Thanks alot for your response, means alot to me :D

[Right After MidNight]

I Get the vibe

but the thing is it feels as if something is missing for me,like the main theme should have a 4-chord progression,not 2. but good job on this regardless. it fits the vibe im in right at the moment.

[GreenHillZone (AmpersandRemix)]

WOW.

This is like smooth jazz,techno and everything in one really. the only reason im giving you a nine is because it's a remix ;D if you make your own songs with this kind of quality,i would definitely give you my first ever 10.

AmpersandKiD responds:

Thanks Nimble! This is incredibly late, but I really appreciate the kind words!

[John, It's Showtime]

haha!

Well done,another piece well made! the only thing i have against this is of course the bad signing in this song,but then again,you guys can sure make cool songs! i think i'll favorite you 'cause you're so awesome :)

Bezbozny responds:

Thanks for the review. How do you think it can be improved? I know the singing is bad, but I don't know exactly where I should improve and where it should be intentionally bad for the sake of humor.
Like for instance, which lines do you think I should re-do?

[Ice rings]

Well Played!

This is quite an interesting song. its very well composed,it just needs to be a bit louder and have distor- never mind,just got to that part :o this is very well composed,but i feel at around the end it's all blurred up.the melody and the background clash way too much,so i would suggest editing the ending so everything gets heard there,and edit the notes being played a little so it doesn't sound really destroyed at the end . it's on the short side of ambient,a VERY short piece for ambient,but that doesn't matter. it must've taken you a long time to record/write this all out. Well done for a first piece as well. i hope seeing good things from you in the future.

9/10,4/5

Pseudofed responds:

Thank you! I really appreciate the advice.

[Steam Rolling The Club!]

2nds?!

even though you did little work on the track before resubmitting it,it sounds better without the rip being in the way of the actual meoldic lines/drum line. the next thing you should work on for sure is diversifying your drum line,like have a certain style other than four on the floor,like Fusion style drum lines. another thing that i might add is that you took my advice rather seriously,which i commend greatly. you're going to go far in the Audio Portal if you listen to your audience,which in this case is only me,but further down the road you're going to have to listen to your audience. great job improving on the track.

DjdClark responds:

thanks alot man i really appreciate it and yea i love getting feedback and getting ideas / suggestions its the best way to improve overall skill being that im still partly new. thanks!!

[Orphanage Of Flame]

-gasp-

this is awesome and all,but you aren't submitting it under the right catagory. you should've instead submitted it as a video game song instead of classical,but thats just me being picky about that XP

great job on this though,i can really tell you worked on this more than you planned to. and the Chrono series is a bit obscure,but it's still a good series,so good choice on what to change up.

[Hivebent - Theme]

this was hilariously awesome.

ok,i havent heard actual vocals with recent audio submissions ever since "things i like about left 4 dead 2" and personally,the only thing thats bad about this song is the bad singing! but the bad singing gives the feel of being a troll,and this song gives the feel,even though initially not felt. REALLY good job,my friend. 4/5,9/10

[Redeemer]

Ambience in Repitition

Ambience in Repitition,hmm? Minimalism has gone far these days. yes,your song sounds well played,but it seems your need to diversify your main melody line,because honestly,it's just the same thing over and over(you switch main instruments twice,and one of those switches is back to the original) have at least a few main melodies to choose from and switch them up every now and then. also,your chord progression with the strings is really decieving,which i like honestly because i like it when a song turns on my predictions,so good job on that one. one more thing:i suggest lowering the reverb slightly so the notes don't repeat themselves.it's better off that way,im telling you. but in overall,you did OK with your song,so if you want,take my review as advice and apply it. i know the ambient genre is usually fond of repitition,but think of stereotypes. not all songs have to be repitition-based. experiment. im sure you'll have fun experimenting and finding a way to diversify.

Tulvadar responds:

WOW!!! I can`t remember when was the last time somebody actually commented my song, let alone been so analytic and helpful. Thanks for the tons of advice. If you don`t mind i would like if you could listen to my other works on NG as well. I`d like to hear your opinion. Thank you for your review.

['Round the Block [V1]]

woah.

That was very good for being a first draft! now,there were somethings (like the longa the first time at :55) that could be background and give the "melody"(the synths) a chance to slide down to their note and be heard,like flipping the dynamics. you should change the snare to a rimknock too,since a rim knock is more "taking you back" kind of feel than a snare can do. also,some parts of the song are either too loud or too soft. for this being a draft,its good,both harmonically and rhythmically,but you still have a long ways to go till you finish this piece. i can't wait to hear the finished version!

T-rebel responds:

There will never be an edited version. My laptop got stolen. FML and all that noise.